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Eigener Songtext - Gast - 13.06.2012
Hey Leute,
hab ein Lied für das Mädchen geschrieben,das ich liebe und wollte eure Meinung dazu hören, bevor ich es ihr zeige.
Close to call you
[Melodie von Payphone von Maroon 5]
I look on my mobile, thinking about you
All of my time I think of you
I’m close to the button
One click and I’ll phone you, don’t know what I gonna say
Yeah I, baby I miss you.
And the time when you were next to me.
I know that we’ve got a future
come over and sit here with me.
You say it’s too late to go
-No matter let’s watch TV
And the time you want to leave
all of my hopes went away.
I would waste all my time
all wasted just for you
Just to fall in love
still try to tell you
That you are- you are my love
But I am too shy to
Bring out the words.
I look on my mobile, thinking about you
All of my time I think of you
I’m close to the button
One click and I’ll phone you, don’t know what I gonna say
If my dreams get fulfilled,
I will be holding you like this,
That will ever be one of my dreams
And the miles between us make me sick
Don’t think about tomorrow
Or what was yesterday
And give me your love for a second
I won’t give it away
I can’t expect you to be mine.
oh no that won’t be fair
You are what I’m looking for
But all of my dreams burned down
I would waste all my time
all wasted just for you
Just to fall in love
still try to tell you
That you are-you are my love
But I am too shy to
Bring out the words.
I look on my mobile, thinking about you
All of my time I think of you
I’m close to the button
One click and I’ll phone you, don’t know what I gonna say
If my dreams get fulfilled,
I will be holding you like this,
That will ever be one of my dreams
And the miles between us make me sick
Now I look on my mobile…
[Wiz Khalifa]
…
I look on my mobile, thinking about you
All of my time I think of you
I’m close to the button
One click and I’ll phone you, don’t know what I gonna say
If my dreams get fulfilled,
I will be holding you like this,
That will ever be one of my dreams
And the miles between us make me sick
Now I look on my mobile…
RE: Eigener Songtext - MrsBrightside - 13.06.2012
nunja, ich dachte nur die melodie ist von payphone und nicht auch noch die lyrics?
der text ähnelt schon sehr dem vom originalen...
oder war das beabsichtigt?
RE: Eigener Songtext - Gast - 13.06.2012
(13.06.2012, 19:48)MrsBrightside schrieb: nunja, ich dachte nur die melodie ist von payphone und nicht auch noch die lyrics?
der text ähnelt schon sehr dem vom originalen...
oder war das beabsichtigt?
Naja es war halt an manchen stellen schwer etwas passendes zu finden